Project Two – Initial Feedback

After completing my first two sketches and presenting them in class we received some feedback on the sketches we’ve done so far. To Troy’s video’s and reflection click here. The main issue we encountered was fitting out sketches into our concept statement, which we still needed to complete. Due to the fact that we haven’t completed it yet we attempted to string our sketches together into a single concept, however Troy and I soon realised that we had to change some of our sketches to fit the criteria. Apart from the fact that both the web series we used in the first project were so different, and we were making sketches based upon the themes of the series rather then the actual video concepts that were being used.

After talking it through with Troy we both decided to choose one video from “The Katering Show” series which was “Food Porn” and to go forward on that. Most of our sketches could be salvaged under this case study and all I had to do was simplify my current two (I was told there was too much post-production and the time was too long).

 

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