Assessment Task 3: Collaborative Hypermedia Story & Reflection

Assessment 3 Networked Media 2016

Jordan Williams, Andrea Blake, Hannah Tepoorten, Karl Vitolo

Muggle in Melbourne 

Link to Photo Map (Front Page)-   http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne

Links to All Pages:

Airport-  http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!airport/aar78 

Bar-  http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!bar/qzkzu

Cafes- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!cafe/lq5lj

Laneways- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!laneways/idqq4

Shopping Malls- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!shopping/qwqf4

Swanston Street- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!swanston-st/ot7dq

Zoo- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!zoo/ji904

Trams- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!trams/z1w0l

Myki- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!myki/y80j8

Kebab Stops-  http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!kebab/k0vru

Trains- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!train-station/k6ceu

Buskers- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!buskers/n1smg

ACMI- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!acmi/fmes3

State Library- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!library/gfydk

Food Court- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!foodcourt/cbo6l

Cinema- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!cinema/tqxi0

Botanical Gardens- http://s3583984.wix.com/muggleinmelbourne#!botanical-gardens/mpasc

Academic Reflection: 

For our final hypermedia story, our group titled Lemonade decided to explore the idea of building an image and text based website targeted at young people between the ages of 7 and 19. Our idea is basically summarised by the title ‘Muggles in Melbourne’, a comedic yet informative guide to Melbourne city, which targets those who aren’t necessarily familiar with human life.

Given that we wanted to target and younger audience, we decided to use humour as a device to engage and entertain the. Our research dictated that audience expectation is very important, and in order to maintain attention and receive positive feedback, the viewer must experience what they intended to. This is a concept explored by Gene Perret and Judy Carter in their educational books on comedy writing. Jay Oatway further confirms this theory by stating that in order to develop a strong online following, content must be consistent and accessed via relevant platforms where the expectation of what the content is has already been developed. Wix allowed us to create a story with engaging and immersive content for young people with shorter attention spans than adults, and a need for constant stimulation. We found it easy to drop in pictures and sounds onto the relevant page and to code image maps for added interactivity.

Our second point of consideration was to figure out how best to create our site in order for it to engage the audience. Since we knew our audience was young, we decided to go with large popping images as these would be easier to navigate and more intuitive. Mark Bernstein states that “muddled writing was more likely to be the source of confusion than hypertextual complexity” therefore, our writing was kept simple and concise, and where possible we used a clickable image map.

The image map was created to engage the viewer at more of a story level, allowing them to select what exactly they are exposed to. This is what is known as an interactive narrative, For example, from the homepage one could choose to look at public transport or at zoos, they are not forced to read through in order like a book. “The medium lends itself to circumstances where readers can play out alternative scenarios” (Douglas, J. Yellowlees). If considered at a deeper level, this effectively means that the audience can create their own expectation, resulting in them being more likely to maintain engagement.

Given time and work, the ideal outcome of a location-based website like the one we built would be to fit into an app format like MONA’s ‘O’ (https://www.mona.net.au/theo) but on a city-wide scale. It allows users to wander around a gallery at their will and reacts to the artworks the user is looking at by popping up useful information and interactive material on the screen, effectively letting the user wander around and determine their own path through the gallery.

Furthermore, the image based website is something that young people are becoming more and more familiar with, as image content grows on websites like Facebook and Tumblr. Adrian Miles refers to this as ‘network literacy’, or an understanding of textual spaces, such as an operating system or a social media website. Given more time, Google analytics could have been employed to allow for readjustments and feedback from viewers.

References:

Bernstein, Mark. “Delightful Vistas: Revisiting the Hypertext Garden.” Travels in Intermediality. Lebanon, US: Dartmouth, 2012. ProQuest ebrary. Web. 8 February 2016. 142-146

Carter, J. (2001). The comedy bible. New York: Fireside.

Douglas, J. Yellowlees. “Books without Pages—Novels without Endings.” The end of books or books without end? : reading interactive narratives. University of Michigan Press ; University Presses Marketing, 1999. 11-36

Guadagno, Rosanna E. et al. ‘What Makes A Video Go Viral? An Analysis Of Emotional Contagion And Internet Memes’. Computers in Human Behavior 29.6 (2013): 2312-2319. Web.

Miles, Adrian. Network Literacy: The New Path to Knowledge [online]. Screen Education, No. 45, 2007: 24-30.

Mona.net.au. (2016). Mona » The O. [online] Available at: https://www.mona.net.au/theo [Accessed 1 Jun. 2016].

Oatway, J. (2012). Mastering story, community and influence. Chichester, West Sussex, U.K.: Wiley.

Perret, G. (2007). The new comedy writing step by step. Sanger, CA: Quill Driver Books/Word Dancer Press.

Progress Update…

Classified is fully underway and we are really happy with the way it is taking shape. We have released another two bits of evidence and they are in the form of a video on a USB highlighting the truth and also a case report and character profiling of the man in the video. The idea of filming a video and putting it on the USB was spawned from the advice received in our pitch, that we should use our skill of filmmaking. I think it turned out really well and flows with the nature of the story.

Our last piece of evidence was another USB with an encrypted file that had a password on it. This password was a series of number, 2837B that unlocked the file and revealed classified banking summaries that showed large amounts of money going out to the second high leader of Scotland and a hitman, to kill the first high leader.

This evidence will lead to the inquiry into the royal family and their happenings. I am really happy with what we have produced to date and am excited to release the final article stating the rest of the sotry. All in all I am happy with the group I am in because me and Luke work really well together and always find a way to compromise and solve problems presented to us.

Melbourne For Muggle’s…

We are now in the swing of the final project for Networked Media. We have completed the planning stages and nutted out what it is we really want to do. We have come up with the idea Melbourne for Muggle’s. Essentially it is a click through photo map that links to different parts of Melbourne. It is a way for people not of this Muggle world to see the different places in Melbourne. Each page/link will have a comical creative writing piece about the place and what the ‘normal’ actions/happenings and ways of life are in those individual places. I believe it will be strongly based on the technical elements of the project because if the user can not navigate the webpage effectively then they will become disinterested in the story/writing. The second element I think is a huge part of the project is the creative writing to keep people interested and to link different pages to each other to allow the audience to create a story in their own minds. Why are these two elements linked? Why are they relevant to each other? These are the questions we want the audience to be asking themselves when they go through the page. It allows them to create their own ideas and story conclusions. For now I need to start writing.

Evidence…

This week and last week me and Luke started producing our Story Lab project, Classified. I am really happy with the way the story is shaping up and where it is going. We have produced a timeline of what will be released and when to all work with each other to give the audience the best and most interesting story experience we can. I think the aspect of our story that makes it unique is that it does focus a lot on the no physical platforms. This really reflects the story and makes it realistic. I have never heard of a private detective online. It is all hush hush and underworld. The idea not to give the detective a name is that it really creates a sense of ambiguity to the identity of the detective and allows the audience to see themselves as the detective working their way through the case. So far it is going well and I think we are keeping to our original intention and that is keeping the story simple yet effective and not confusing the audience to a point of being disinterested.

The first piece of evidence consisted of a news article created by ourselves about the Scottish Independence election and a sub story of the High leader being killed. Along with this a map of London was included with an address marked out to meet. A handwritten note is also included to keep that anonymous

Our Release…

Week 1 Release – Week 10

  • Introductory News Article ✔
  • Map of London- Location Marked✔
  • Number on Envelope ✔
  • Handwritten Note
  • First Blog on @therealvoiceofscotland ✔

Week 2 Release – Week 11

  • Video in envelope found at Location
  • Blog update with video on there
  • Numbers still occurring.

Week 3 Release- Week 12

  • ­Character Report of the person found at week 2 evidence
  • Character Profile
  • Transaction Statements showing the debits from the account to hitman and second leader to throw election- Online or physical (TBA) – WIX
  • No Update to the blog post as owner is in custody of detective.

Week 4 Release- Week 13

  • Final Article revealing all
  • Blog Post (Justice is served)

 

 

 

Assessment 2- Community…

As I am blogging about travel I am always uploading photos along with my posts and this allowed me to come to the conclusion to create and hopefully establish an Instagram account dedicated to all the photos I have taken along my journey. I speak about this in my blog post My People.

When creating the account @just_go_there I had to consider multiple details. From the name, which required a lot of thought because I had to ensure that it was catchy, easy to remember and somewhat relatable to the way my posts were going to be set out, to ensure I was noticed. This led me to think of the ideas of Jay Bolter. He speaks of links and how they connect people, “add photos and tag them (forging implicit or explicit links), tell your friends that you like a page, a song, a tweet (leading to further ramifications as they connect to that page), and so on.”(Bolter,p208) This allowed me to understand the power of hash tags on Instagram and by using them I will open my self up to more followers in turn more traction on my account. Then in conjunction with this idea of Bolter’s was what Jay Oatway spoke of in Mastering Story, Community and InfluenceHis idea of trying to communicate with the people who don’t have lots of followers instead of going to the ones with hundreds of thousands. This will allow you to create connections and understand who is following who and why. The other detail he speaks of is that you need “social currency” to break the “big five” because when they “notice you, you want them to be able to check out your stories and see that you have value to offer” (Oatway, p99) This is what I really tried to do, to upload regular content, it showed to work as I got people with nearly fifty thousand followers to follow me and hopefully at some stage repost my content.

Instagram as a platform I found to be quite accessible and easy to use. It really emphasises the use of pictures as a means of communicating the meaning of what one is trying to say. It really shows through if you are passionate because the quality and the presentation of the photos are quite appealing. I felt quite surprised when I uploaded my first photo that I managed to gain almost five to six followers and also get over twenty likes on the photo. I think this was largely to do with use of the multiple and generalised hash tags which allows people to see the photo by simply searching the word. I felt that in terms of actually communicating with other users it was harder as it is such a large photo based social media site. This is not to say that you receive no communication as I did receive comments and commented on others photos. Some examples in my blog post Contributing and Commenting and Instagram Pictures. There is obviously a reoccurring theme where if one has more subscribers then they will receive more of a reception on the photos they publish. However, there is a repetitive theme that the people with the highest amount of followers also post in large volumes, a tip I tried to emulate. Overall, it was an experience that I enjoyed and feel as if I am apart of the travel bloggers of Instagram community and will definitely be establishing myself further on @just_go_there.

 

References:

Bolter, Jay David. “Social Media and the Future of Political Narrative.” Travels in Intermediality. Lebanon, US: Dartmouth, 2012. ProQuest ebrary. Web. 8 February 2016. 206-226

Oatway, Jay, Apr 26, 2012, Mastering Story, Community and Influence : How to Use Social Media to Become a Socialeader Wiley, Hoboken. 97-109. ISBN: 9781119943457.

https://www.instagram.com/just_go_there/

 

Contributing and Commenting…

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Comments and Responses

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First Comment on First Post

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Compliments

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Connecting with people

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The Likes Section of my Instagram

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Setup of how I post my pictures

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The Posts, Followers and Following Section. Also my Bio with a Link to the Travel Category of my Blog

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Sharing the Love

Instagram Pictures…

So it has been a little over a couple of weeks since I started my blog and I am finding more fun and interesting than I thought I would. It has allowed me to really explore my passions and what I want to achieve from the course and myself in the course. I have found it quite enjoyable to be able to reflect on and edit my own photos to a standard that is surprisingly high in the travel Instagram blogging community. I find the images speak 1000 words to what the people publishing them are saying they actually yell the kind of people we are without having to actually see the person. Below are a few screenshots of my pictures that I have uploaded in the space. You can also see them on the additional Instagram feed I have embedded to my blog in the side bar. Also I have gained more followers than I anticipated I would have in a short amount of time.

 

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Getting Started…

This week we began the construction, conception and implementation of our major project for Story Lab. All the weeks have lead up to this moment where we get to finally create our own transmedia story. After what I believe was a good project three presentation of our story I am excited to get it all started. As we have decided to release a piece of evidence a week over the next four weeks we needed to get cracking on creating our first piece. I believe that we have created a really good first piece of evidence. It consists of a newspaper article, created entirely by ourselves, a map of London with a particular location marked out for the detective to go and also a handwritten note. All of this is wrapped up in an envelope with a particular number on the back. I think that for our first piece we have definitely set-up the story and showed over two different platforms story development and advancement. As the weeks progress the evidence will continue to build the story. In terms of digital media we have started a blog called ‘therealvoiceofscotland’. This blog is an anti-England blog stating that the vote was thrown and foul play was the cause. The aesthetic of the blog is quite amateur but that is the look we want. Someone who has a valid underdog opinion but on a low budget raw website which in some way reflects the tone and the content of the blog. Overall, I enjoyed doing the first piece and am excited for the rest.

The Final Assessment…

This week we began our final assessment for Networked Media. It is now time for us to implement what we have learned through the course from the workshops, lectures and readings and create our own interactive, inclusive and original hypermedia story. I was excited about this idea as I have found that a lot of the course I am doing is applicable to this project. Particularly the content I am learning in Story Lab about transmedia and we are now creating our own transmedia stories.

I think this project will need to focus most of its energy on making a story that lends itself to different mediums and final outcomes to truly make it enjoyable. Also I feel the experience needs to be fluid and without fault as an audience will become disinterested if they are experiencing problems with the technicalities. We then had to form our groups and I am quite happy with my group as we all have different abilities that we can contribute to make the project the best it can be. For example Andrea has a strong ability in writing and she likes to write and Hannah has the ability to understand the technical side of it. Jordan is a video developer and can help interject the different platforms the assessment requires. I hope to bring to the group help in all of these fields from text and story to mixed media and even helping the technical side of things along.