Unfortunately, myself and my teammate weren’t able to attend the pitch presentation in person. We received some feedback from Paul and Hannah. Paul recommended we “Start putting things together and investigating the different ways of listing and then backwards engineer colour, types of shots, effects” we I think I have started putting into practice effectively.

Hannah insisted that a cohesive narrative isn’t important for this piece, and I feel like it is necessary to keep hearing that feedback, as it is at odds with most media I try to create. I have definitely been trying to bring a conceptualised randomness to my works in listing.

Unfortunately, we did not receive feedback from the third panel member, but I think we have enough to be getting on with.