Well, I finished my documentary pitch. Thank you Kim, Robin and Rachel.
My documentary pitch is easy understanding. I am a model in this documentary and I want to record my daily life in Melbourne. Because my documentary focus on ‘Grow up & New life’. Robin gave me a suggestion that I just focus on ‘Grow up’ and add some details into the documentary.
First, I think I can focus on ‘cooking’. As an overseas student, cooking is a required course. Each student need to take care of themselves.
Second, communication is an important part too. English as a second language for us, we are not good at it. When we talk with others, we will maybe face some problems, such as communication gap and misunderstanding. When we meet these problems, we need to solve them.
So, I really expect my documentary. Fighting!!!