For Tuesday’s presentation, I presented two concepts to the class that sparked interest in me investigating further on the topics. The first concept, which has to be based around a particular subject, I presented my friend’s story of overcoming Bulimia. Her story was empowering as not only was she opened to talking about a serious topic and her journey with Bulimia, but she overcame something that changed the way she thinks of her own body. Thus, I wanted her as a subject for my first concept’s documentary due to what she had witnessed the change in herself.
For the second concept, which was focusing on an issue-based concept, I wanted to present an idea of domestic abuse. The issues that I wanted to focused on were; the types of abuse – such as physical and emotional abuse, domestic violence for both men and women and the aftermath of being in domestic violence relationship. My interests was mainly on how people got out of such abusive relationship and environment, showing much courage to do so. That was the angle I wanted to focus on for my second concept.
Due to the feedbacks I’ve gotten from both my lecturer and my classmates, I’ve chosen to further develop on my first concept as the direction I planned for my documentary was much clearer and I have an easier accessibility to the subject as compared to my second concept.
As for the challenges with my first concept on Bulimia. Firstly, the accessibility of talking to experts’ in the field. Even though the main focus for my documentary would be on my friend and her story of recovery, I would also like to have some facts and information from an expert’s point of view. However, if I am not being able to have access to experts in the field, such as doctors or psychiatrists, it will not be as informative.
Secondly, if I am able to get access to these experts, will they be an interesting enough to be added as a secondary subject into the documentary? People that we are interviewing has to be comfortable talking in front of a camera and are able to articulate well. Thus, even if I get access to experts in the field before the shoot, I have to prep them and make sure that they are comfortable doing an interview.
Lastly, the location will also be a potential challenge. My friend is from Singapore, thus even though she has moved to Melbourne a few months ago, it will be hard to have her convey her experience when she had bulimia. This is because she is in a very different and new environment. It may not have the same effect on her during the interview. Thus, I have to think of a location where she would be comfortable and have a “set design” to look like her bedroom back in Singapore.
After identifying which concept I wanted to do, I needed to do further research on the subject matter and the topic of Bulimia. I’ve done a little research for the presentation, such as statistics and percentages of eating disorder between men and women. I’ve also researched on what organisations in Melbourne that provides information and services for people facing eating disorder, such as “Eating Disorders Victoria”. They have information of different types of eating disorders on their website and they also provide a helpline.
To further my research, there is another company called, “Body Positive” in Melbourne, after my presentation on Tuesday. The company, “Body Positive” was founded by two friends, Sarah Harry and Fiona Sutherland. The company includes group therapy, counselling and healthy living. It is known that Sarah Harry had appeared on various TV station for interviews about the company. She could be a potential interviewee, as to give an insight for the service her company provide for people with body image issues.
How I started on the Bulimia concept was the discussion I had with my lecturer, Kim, and my classmate, Grace. We were discussing on potential topics and it ended up on how women tend to lower their self-esteems in job interviews. Which I thought of my friend who had suffered with Bulimia in the past and thought her story of recovery would align with the word “WITNESS”. When I started doing my research on eating disorder, I found many articles of how there’s a higher percentage of young women, who suffers from eating disorder. Thus, I wanted to make this documentary as an inspiration for young women who are struggling with eating disorder and even young women who struggles with it.
As for the planning of my documentary, these are the plans;
As women, we’ve been pressured and harshly judged ourselves with the way we look, that we start to think that we’re not good enough.
Her demons made her frail and weak but her strong will bulked her up to fight back
The colour palette for my documentary film will be mainly in neutral colours for interview segment. As for images used as B-rolls would be black and white or blue tint added. If there is also information or statistic research that I want to show to the audience, it will be shown in text form on screen.
Examples of colour palettes:

– Natural colour and lighting for interview

– Black and white or blue tint for flashbacks/photographs of her from the past
Texts examples for information of research about Bulimia (on screen):

Shooting style that I am going for is a conversational style interview, where there will be both interviewer and interviewee in the shot. I think shooting in a conversational style, would not only make the documentary look more interesting, but it will also make the interviewee more relax during the interview.
Most of the shot sizes would be static shots, two shots of both the interviewer and interviewee, mid-close up, mid shot and close up for interviewing shots, whereas the B-rolls will be close ups of past photos, such as childhood, ballet at a young age, picture of her at age 15 and her age now, at 21. The pictures will also act as a story teller, where her voice portion of her voice from the interview will be played at the back while on screen, it will be showing pictures of her past.
An example:

– Conversation mid close up shots, two different camera angles
- Synopsis on what issue is being explored:
The issue that is being explored would be the high rate of women who has an eating disorder, more specifically Bulimia and why women feel the need to look or weigh a certain weight to make them feel good. Another issue would be, the aftermath stage of somebody who had bulimia. For example, how she overcome bulimia, what kind of treatment or help she gotten, how is her life after overcoming bulimia.
- List Research completed and map-out a research plan:
These are the researched that I’ve done regarding eating disorders and body image of women.
– Treasure, J., Claudino, AM., Zucker, N. (2010), The Lancet; Eating disorders (seminar) , ScienceDirect, accessed 1 August 2018, <https://www-sciencedirect-com.ezproxy.lib.rmit.edu.au/science/article/pii/S0140673609617487>
– Eating Disorders Victoria (organisation) 2016, accessed 1 August 2018, <https://www.eatingdisorders.org.au/about-us>
– Vincent, Debra Alexa R., Ph. D. (1993), The Study of Body Esteem and Ideal Body Types In Women, ProQuest Dissertatins Publishing, accessed 2 August 2018, <https://search-proquest-com.ezproxy.lib.rmit.edu.au/docview/304050549?pq-origsite=primo>
As for the mapping-out a research plan, I would have to think of the questions pertaining to the keywords “eating disorder” and “Bulimia”. Possible questions or information I want to find out more about would be:
– How to overcome Bulimia?
– The stigma behind the word “eating disorder” and “Bulimia”
– Are there other resources, such as online, a person going through Bulimia could get, if they are not comfortable talking face to face?
I would also need to research on the eating disorder community, the percentage of women who suffers from Bulimia specifically.
- Identify potential interview subjects:
A possible main interview subject would be my friend, Maddy, who struggled with Bulimia in the past. Now she is living a healthier lifestyle and has become a vegetarian.
Another possible subject would be experts in the field, such as counsellors and therapists, from “Eating Disorders Victoria” Organisation. This will enable me to get a more informative content for my documentary.
Other than getting into contact with the people at “Eating Disorders Victoria”, another field of experts that I could look into would be Sarah Harry and Fiona Sutherland from “Body Positive” company.
- Reference documentaries as to style:
– Shane., 2018, Becoming Jeffree Star, viewed 2 August 2018 <https://youtu.be/uxtT_6d0DWQ?t=21m18s>
- Two people conversation instead of just the interviewee in the shot.
Example of possible shots and documentary style:

– Only Human, 2018, The truth about fussy eaters, viewed 2 August 2018<https://youtu.be/IsoSub6zu28?t=1m16s>
- The link is an example of an eating disorder documentary
- Close up shot of the interviewee with items are out of focus – Items can be “food related”
- B-rolls shot of the subject walking around
- Following around the subject, to show her daily life as a student and dancer.
Example of possible shots:

– Chilombo, K., 2017, JhenéAiko – Documentary (Very inspiring),viewed 2 August 2018 <https://youtu.be/B_eCv3P1WWg?t=7m23s>
- The video link is an example of a documentary about a personal story
- Colours/tone similar – blue tint and neutral colours
- Interview set up will be mid-close up as to show how comfortable the subject is during the interview
- Old pictures of her when she was a dancer or when she was 15, when her bulimia was obvious.

This is a link to my presentation:
Link to Khalidah’s Witness Concepts Presentation