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INTERVIEW Qs for ARIEL:

(pre-discussion with Rohan)

  1. Tell us about where you were born and why did you migrate to Australia.
  2. Tell us about how you first got involved with the Coogi Sweaters.
  3. Tell us about when you set up here at the markets.
  4. How do you feel when you see someone wearing a Coogi sweater?
  5. You said you choose the colours for the sweaters… why do you use such vibrant, in-your-face colours?
  6. What’s your favourite colour?
  7. What kind of people do you sell Coogi sweaters to? And has that changed over the years?
  8. What’s the plan for the future? 

(post discussion with Rohan)

  1. Can you tell me how you usually introduce yourself to people.
  2. When did you first notice Coogi Sweaters?
  3. How would you describe a Coogi Sweater to someone who hasn’t seen one before? Does a lot of work going into the making of a Coogi sweater.
  4. Tell us about how you first got involved with selling Coogi at the Queen Victoria Markets.
  5. Tell us about the different types of customers that come to your stall? Has the clientele changed?
  6. How do you feel when you see someone wearing a Coogi sweater on the street?
  7. Do you think people should wear more colour?
  8. YOUR ROLE? ANY LIFE GOALS BEYOND?

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PB#3 Pitch + Proposal

Haylee and I presented our documentary concept today. We were reasonable relaxed in presenting our idea as we feel comfortable with what we’d like to achieve and how to achieve it. Our biggest concern is that Ariel will not give us as much time as we would like, but we’re hopefully that once we get rolling with him he will warm to us and better understand the benefits for him i.e. posting the final video online to his socials and/or a recollection of his achievements to share with friends and family.

Rohan encouraged us to reiterate that the film is a celebration of Ariel and his longstanding career as the Coogi Man. I think that once this sinks in with Ariel he will be more inclined to spend more time with us and show off a little.

Haylee and I visited RMIT’s Audio Visual Loans studio in building 8 during our lunch break and tentatively booked a Canon 5D Mark III, a Canon L Series 24 – 105mm f4 lens, Canon 100mm f2.8 Macro, a Zoom H5N mic, a Sennheiser Single Channel Lapel mics and a tripod.


EDITING STRATEGIES: 

(Haylee and I have been assigned ROOM 2 suite for editing)

#Use the editing suite as an office.
#Structure the documentary using index cards.


STEPS FOR EDITING INTERVIEW


  1. Markers with the questions added to the clip: in clip bin, not timeline. (side note: written transcript of everything that is said, 6:1 ratio–six hours typing per one hour interview)

 

  1. Second step, cut out all the footage you don’t need from clip.

 

  1.  Remove moments that could be replaced by cutaways, or moments that aren’t that important in telling the story.

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NEW documentary CONCEPT

Working title: LIFE IN COLOUR

Logline:

A celebration of Ariel Gabizon’s 30 year long career as the ‘Coogi Man’ and his longstanding devotion to style and colour.

Synopsis:

 The Queen Victoria Markets has seen many changes in recent decades, but for the last 30 years Ariel Gabizon has continued to sell vibrant Coogi sweaters within the bustling marketplace, spreading colour throughout customers lives. Over the years he has sold colourful garments to every type of person imaginable, asserting the inclusive belief that colour is for everyone. Life in Colour will explore Ariel’s long history with the market, the iconic Coogi sweater and the people who enjoy them.

Treatment:

 Life in Colour opens with an establishing shot of the Queen Victoria Market, deep within the miscellaneous items and clothing stalls, people walking past. The title appears over the top in bold rainbow colours, then breaks into a rapid series of close up shots detailing the colourful patterns of Coogi Jumpers, accompanied by upbeat pop music (Music video-style sound and visual rhythmic arrangement).

The music softens and we establish our main subject, Ariel Gabizon, the owner of Ariel’s Sweater Shop at the Queen Victoria Markets. He is tall, dark and uninviting. He is sitting amid his stall, perfect symmetry shot, he has a deadpan expression looking down the lens. He is contrasted by his all-black attire and his neon orange nike sneakers. Ariel’s voiceover begins (from an interview we conduct with him) about his story of how he began working in the markets and his love for colour and the garments he sells. This will be layered with a series of handheld shots of him engaging with the sweaters (i.e. trying them on, or holding them up to the camera), and walking through the markets and interacting with his colleagues.

Ariel has been selling Coogi sweaters at the QVM for over 30 years and photographs of people wearing the jumpers in the past would visually communicate that (ideally photographs of him but pending accessibility). Archival images of celebrities (Notorious B.I.G, Snoop Dogg) will illustrate the brands iconic status and history. These images will play out in a sequence as Ariel talks about the history of Sweaters Australia and its prevalence in the 90s hip-hop scene.

The documentary closes with the first establishing shot we saw of Ariel sitting in his stall with a cold expression. The music strengthens and brightens as we slowly track out as he holds his cold exterior, and then he cracks a smile/breaks into a laugh. Credits roll.

Timeline:

By Thursday 19th January: Collected establishment shots & cutaways on the sweaters & talk to Ariel (discover more background info about him).

By Thursday 26th January: Interview completed

By the 31st January: Have interview rushes ready to present to class.

By Tuesday 7th February: Rough cut of video

By Tuesday 14th January: COMPLETED VIDEO.

 

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PB#4 UPDATE

Unfortunately, Timmy, the punk vegan, declined. He felt too nervous about being on camera. He has no problem performing live with his band and putting on a show (he cross-dresses and takes off his clothes etc), though performing to a camera inspires feelings akin to an anxiety attack.

So! On to the next subject. Two members of my group joined other groups based on this event, which was absolutely fine with me because I prefer working in smaller groups. also, the remaining member, Haylee McCormick, and I have a similar approach and complimentary personalities to be able to make something in a supportive and relaxed manner.

Hence, we went forth, back to the Queen Victoria Markets, to find our subject. We were a little stressed in this process because the clock is ticking re the amount of time we have left to complete a document, let alone have a subject to make a documentary on! After half an hour of storming up and down the isles of miscellaneous goods, we found him – Ariel Gabizon, the ‘Coogi Man’.

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G E R I_Molly Dineen


After watching a snippet in class of the documentary Geri by Molly Dineen, I couldn’t resist watching the whole doco at home. I was so impressed by Dineen’s approach. She was very assertive about her rights as documentarian (referring to: Geri talking on the phone to her publicist and saying she has complete control over the film. Dineen then confronts her about this). This is something I struggle with as a practitioner and aspiring filmmaker–asserting my rights and standing my ground. This is a great example for all documentarians who are navigating their way through the complexities of rights-as-subject vs. rights-of-documentarian.
Secondly, Dineen has an overtly sophisticated brain. She ever so subtle encourages Geri to delve deeper–to reveal (and discover, I think) more. I do not think this is necessarily a learned skill. The is an innate ability, a talent if you will. It takes a certain level of learned and emotional intelligence to penetrate people’s darkest corners without aggravating and upsetting them. Dineen was clearly the precursor for notable documentarian Louis Theroux. He has a very similar approach and gift.

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ROHAN’s INTERVIEW TIPS

Rohan spent a good portion of class discussion how to approach a recorded interview. His advice is immeasurably invaluable, especially given we are soon to approach our subjects (perfect strangers) for our own films and we are mostly novices when it comes to documentary filmmaking.

First tip was to survey the area for good, flat lighting for the interviewee. Also taking into account composition and ‘art direction’ for the shot. Second tip was to have a series of questions prepared (no more than ten) and to demonstrate to the subject how they should answer the questions (including the question). The questions should begin with open phrasing, such as:

  1. Tell me about….?
  2. Tell me how…?
  3. When did you…?
  4. Can you tell me about?

HOT TIPS

  1. Start with Hope or Aspiration…. And idea of the “DESTINATION” and shape the interview questions around this.
  2. No more than TEN questions
  3. Capture images that best serve your interview
  4. NEVER Interview someone with STRIPE SHIRT/DRESS

ARRIVAL ON SET:

FIND SOFT LIGHTING… STUDY FACE… LOOK FOR SHADOWS on face, EVEN LIGHTING, ITEMS IN THE ROOM THAT TELL THE AUDIENCE WHERE THEY ARE SET UP (allude to character background)… DETAILS OF DEPTH… BUILDING A SHOT WHERE PARTICIPANT IS FLATLY LIT, ITEMS THAT TELL US WHERE WE ARE + APPLYING RULE OF THIRDS…. RECORD ROOM NOISE… with every MIC. SHOW EMPATHY FOR CHARACTER and STORY, and KNOW THEIR BACKGROUND.

DEMONSTRATE to SUBJECT to START TO TALK IN PARAGRAPHS… allowing them to delve into their story. To REHASH and RE-ITERATE their answer if it is CONFUSED or MISSING INFO YOU NEED, pretend to readjust the sound (fake and error) THEN INTRODUCE THE QUESTION AND HOW TO ANSWER IT AGAIN.

TELL THE SUBJECT THEY CAN PASS ON A QUESTION… “but I dont think theres anything here…/but I’m sure you won’t need to…”/ MAKING THE SUBJECT FEEL THEY SHOULD FEEL COMFORTABLE.

PUT QUESTIONS ON IPHONE! LISTEN WITH YOUR FACE, DO NOT RESPOND!

“IS THERE ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANNA TALK ABOUT…?” (to finish, and allow them to roll out a bunch of experiences of emotions).

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The top contenders post the observational exercise were:

Flower Delivery Man
Flamenco Dancer
Punk Vegan
Old Man Cannot Count Change 
Donut Van
Female Willy Wonka

 


MY THOUGHT PROCESS


10 people in my class raised their hand to be involved in producing the Punk Vegan concept. Looks like I am going ahead with it. Next step will be to approach the Punk Vegan and hope he will accept my offer to document him/his life.

I am nervous about this exchange, but I am more passionate about making a great short doco than I am worried about rejection or embarrassing myself. Worst case is he will decline and that’s really not that bad a situation. Though with the time constraints of the studio it will make things difficult for myself and the students who have attached themselves to this project.

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PB#1 Observational Exercise.

Week One task was to:

  • Describe where you are, what you can see, smell, hear.
  • Consider the people you can see milling and working around you. Describe them as a collective. Focus in on three who take your interest. Describe three in detail.
  • Without speaking to any of these three, imagine where they could conceivably have come from and be going to from here.
  • Without speaking to any of these three, imagine how or why they could conceivably feature in a documentary.

Before even attempting this task my world as an aspiring filmmaker opened up… suddenly I felt I understood some key formula to creating interesting ideas for documentary cinema. Everywhere I look now I see a story… or at least I imagine there is one.

I discovered three potential documentary subjects. 1)  A tattoo-covered woman with a butch appearance and demeanour working at a New York inspired hot dog stand. 2) A three-generational Indian family running their own QVM-situated cafe. And 3) A hardcore punk working at an organic food stall.

 

 

P-4 PROTOTYPE

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We’ve organically endured this process of creating vine after vine repeating the use of dialectical montage as a foundation and have ended up with something meaningful in 2015. Our final prototype is FEMIVINE our feminist vine channel. Our vines are examples of how we have effectively used dialectical montage in Vine. Our channel consists of vines we’ve created and edited both in Vine using the application itself and also out of Vine using other applications and editing software such as Final Cut Pro and even Apple’s iMovie and iStopmotion. We’ve sourced content from royalty free archives such as archive.org and have re-used our own old footage and created new videos. We’ve vined and revined and have had our videos looping from our own views but also those of other users.

Our Prototype Process:

Our process was a little bit different as rather than repeatedly making an experimental large-scale prototype- we repeatedly experimented with theory in the vines we created to inform our next move and come up with our prototype. Early in Project 4 we’d thought our prototype would possibly be a few vines that best demonstrate our probe: how to effectively use dialectical montage in Vine.
Since we created our channel however, the project seemed to grow as our amount of vines did and there were a few major iterations in our channel and our purpose in its entirety that lead to the development of our final prototype. Iterations listed don’t all show how our prototype changed but instead show reflections on how our channel developed and screenshots on its different stages.

Iteration 1  (Wk11) Our channel created for practicality
Iteration 2 (Wk11) Continued Reflection on early days of our channel

Iteration 3 (Wk11/12) Reflection on Major Iteration

Iteration 4 (Wk 12) What the channel would have looked like had we not developed past this point!

Iteration 5 The breakthough

Report g-doc link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PtpdSllqR2-RX-dVtBvEQivmGyVeafijG18ciT3zKIs/edit

 

OVE Portfolio

Maria and I began working from a case study that examined an online video competition launched by Eli Roth and his digital horror network The Crypt, called #6SecondScare. #6SecondScare was orchestrated through short-form video sharing service, Vine. We’ve since evolved our project, focussing solely on Vine as a platform, though looking closely at dialectical montage, using the Kuleshov effect as a theoretical and visual reference for our explorations. Essentially, our objective was to examine how the theory of dialectical montage is exemplified through Vine. This too has evolved into our Project Four prototype: a Vine account called FEMIVINE, which utilises the theoretical foundations of dialectical montage to convey messages of self-interest. In this case, feminism.

Maria and I have worked exclusively with the platform Vine in our exploration of online video practise. Vine is a user-generated short-form online video sharing service, which emerged alongside other social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter. Maria and I have acquired extensive knowledge about this service, from form and Vine-specific creativity, right through to copyright infringement loopholes.

The evolution of our ideas and the experimental nature of our developments are consequential of the sketching process championed by our tutor, Seth, and award-winning music educator, Eric Booth. Our studio encouraged creative freedom, playful brainstorming and practical ‘excess’, meaning, produce as many sketches as possible sans overthinking and over-analysis. In other words, allow for experimentation and avoid creative trajectories. Our projects (specifically p-3 and p-4) have been predominantly theory-led, but over the course of the studio we have moved away from theory-led research and toward a more exploratory practise-led process. It took me awhile to adopt the exploratory sketching process to inform my projects. I am naturally drawn the theoretical basis, so it is difficult for me to disassociate from well founded principles and, instead, trust my creative instincts. Though I do not regret my decision to begin with theory-led research, because I feel this is a more reliable structure to work from. I would prefer to solidify my theoretical groundings and undertake exploratory investigations inspired by those theories, rather than backpedal and precariously draw theoretical implications after a product is made. That said, I am so grateful to this studio for encouraging me to adopt the sketching process. Now that I am comfortable with this approach, I am certain I will apply this attitude to many other tasks/activities throughout my academic development and, similarly, to my personal and professional endeavours.

The second, most prominent, feature of our studio was presentations. I have presented approximately five times altogether. I recall feeling terrified for my first presentation, and having very little idea as to what was expected of me. By no means have I perfected my presentations, I have, however, acquired a confidence in knowing what kind of informational and aids I should include in my presentations. As well as a more relaxed and comfortable attitude towards presenting my ideas to a class.

The most relevant theoretical component of our studio is the distinction of narrative/non-narrative form. Bordwell and Thompson’s definitions of narrative form and structure informed the majority of our explorations. Bordwell and Thompson four different types of nonnarrative form: rhetorical, categorical, abstract and associational. Our exploration of dialectical montage in Vine relates to Bordwell and Thompson’s definition of ‘associational form’, wherein the juxtaposition of loosely connected images convey an emotion or concept to the audience. The very fact that the images and sounds are juxtaposed makes us look for a connection or association that binds them together. Dialectical montage–our theoretical focus for p-3 and p-4–Montage operates on the principle that the juxtaposition of two shots, and the consequent conflict, allows for abstract concepts to be understood by inference. Essentially, montage is based on the principle that people are hard-wired to make connections by association and create meaning out of what they see.

My most significant ‘breakthrough’ was learning the obvious distinction between traditional and new media. These are areas I intrinsically understand as being different, though I never consciously considered the clear segregation of the two. Eugenia Siapera’s text on the different theoretical perspectives on new media guided my understanding of the synergy of society and technology. Society and technology evolve together. This is an area I would like a greater understanding of, as I have only scratched the surface.

Lastly, the blogging process attributed to this course has been revolutionary for me. I can be forgetful and, similarly, disorganised with archiving research. Having one place to document all of my research, including my assignments, has been a life-saver.

Overall, my studio experience has been remarkably informative. The progress I have made over the semester, foremost, a confidence in sharing my academic judgement, is enormous. Only in retrospect have I acknowledged how much I have gained from this studio: the ability to creatively sketch my ideas, presentation skills, a thorough understanding of narrative form, and intensive knowledge of social media platform, Vine.

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