We are very lucky to get feedback from Jon Tjhia, I found what was really useful is that he liked how we started our audio, and suggested us to look into dynamic compression, it will help reducing the lacking of stability of volume of our rough cut.
I liked how Tessa and Joey used the sounds effect of the telephone. It sounded really realistic and engaged me as an audience.
I found Hannah’s feedbacks helpful as well. I had the same feeling of the first music introduction bit of our rough cut audio is a bit long due to the lacking of narration. We were worried about not being able to interview someone from the older Media generation that has only read comic books but not the tv series, but then came up of a plan to make the script up and get someone else to record that for us. All 3 of us feel not as bad and more confident about our pb4 after this workshop.