You will write a personal reflection of 800–1000 words which creatively responds to the prompts below. This reflection will be posted on your individual Mediafactory blog.
- consider in what ways you hope your final work engages its audience and communicates a key concern of the studio? Draw upon your experiences from attending the studio exhibition.
I hope that our work of sweet Lilies on the waterfront is seen as something experimental and outside of the box. Our final product is less about the narrative that is hidden in soliloquy and more about the emotional response it provokes. The piece does not adhere to any type of traditional film storytelling due to the constraints and freestyle flow style of the piece itself, using multiple layers of B-roll to carry the story along with an audio that consists of a poem that hits at the overarching plotline. The studio exhibition all fell under different genres as well as styles, and how they worked with/around their constraints.
- Outline the singular most successful and singular most problematic aspect of your process/finished work
The most successful aspect was probably the way the constraints worked with our overall piece. Most of our film was b-roll shifting through the film, which meant that, for our constraint, cut when someone blinks, we could continuously cut to a shot of b-roll and emphasise its role as a memory, which our film is about, without it looking out of place.
The most problematic period was during our production phase, when I felt we were underprepared for what to film and what was needed practically. The free-flow production style didn’t work for my specific work style, often needing more communication and structure for filming schedules. I think, based on what Rabinger states in Developing a Crew was that there was more communication needed to establish the style that we’re going for, which may have been lacking on both part of the listeners’ and the discussions (Rabinger, 2003).
- imagine you are going to keep working on that media piece, what would be the core things you would want to improve and extend and why?
I would like yes to give more shops that give background depths to the characters as well as the story being told, needing more dialogue and an in-depth look into the character itself. Shelton includes a trinket set design that gives more insight into the character’s personality and background. I feel this would help the audience connect to the character more emotionally, as well as giving context to the missing memories would help the audience form a cohesive narrative, as well as be invested in the character’s emotions and storytelling, and build the world of the film. I feel like we didn’t have time to add these elements of our film which were included in some feedback of earlier screenings which is why I would want to improve and extend this part of the story however with the time frame and conflicts we were unable to dive more into that aspect of the character on the story.
- outline one key thing you’ve learnt from your studio experience that you will take into your future thinking and practice
These constraints we had given can also lead to more unique pieces and create elements for a film that were not originally there. Working with constraints can help cultivate creativity and build a style that is unique to the piece. Understanding what your constraints are is the foundation of bringing your work to life practically and pragmatically. I work best with a clear work structure, and preparation is the best for me for production schedules. In terms of production, I felt like I work best with structure, but I also learned the navigation between a director’s vision and the editors vision and how to compromise on those and produce a piece of work that you are both proud of as well as staying true to both the editors and the directors creative vision. My role as editor meant that I had to listen and also respect my director’s vision, develop a relationship with the piece and the director’s vision, at symbiotically work and compromise together (Bendon, 2022).
- what’s one key takeaway about working collaboratively?
Compromising and working together to breakdown the creative vision which the best foundation is communication I learned how to navigate my own vision with my director’s vision and the multiple versions of editing and different styles in order to compromise between those two which meant vetoing certain aspects of an edit that I was happy about that the director did not agree with as the director did the same for me building a relationship with the piece and how it looks must be symbiotic with the directors vision in order to do it justice. It is also helping practice genre editing as suggested by Rosenberg in The Healthy Edit, which took studying the inspiration pieces and how they work to create the genre, which was drama and road trip, and how that plays without constraints (Rosenberg, 2017).
- include at least 3 x references to readings from the course/individual research to support your reflection
1- Rosenberg, John – The Healthy Edit / Chapter 8: Genre Editing Styles I (2017)
2- Rabinger, Michael – Developing A Crew
Bendon, H & Lukic, V 2022, ‘Embedding impact in collaborative filmmaking processes: a case study’, Media Practice and Education, vol. 23, Informa UK Limited, no. 2, pp. 188–194, viewed 8 June 2025, <https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/citedby/10.1080/25741136.2022.2056792?scroll=top&needAccess=true>.

