Reflection: Week 5a – Presenting Our Project TWO

Reporting:
Project two was presented to our lecturer today. Well all I can say it was… a good effort. We presented our ten sketches through our thorough research on our case study, 89 Steps. Peter had explored in the user-action aspect of online video. He experimented with the various online video platforms suitable for interactivity shorts. I explored in the technical and participatory aspect of the interactive documentary. I picked out certain technical shots that enhanced participatory affect as well as using participation like alternate endings.

Our issue today was… I guess our presentation preparation did not prioritise the timing but more on the content for the sketches. We were so focused on how to explain the sketches that we did not time our presentation. Even that as well, we failed to make time for explaining how these sketches helped us understand in relation to the case study video. I had trouble trying to understand questions being thrown in during the Q&A session because I did not quite understand some of the concepts.

Relating:
I had a similar problem once back in college. We had timed the presentation more than three times but we still were press for time. When we presented, one of our group members accidentally talked more than she was supposed to and one of us did not have enough time to explain her part. All in all, I probably think I have problems with timing during the actual presentation.

Reasoning:
Practice makes perfect! – Timing is very important. If you see TED talks, the presentations are heavily timed, practiced until they memorised their script. When someone knows their facts well and presents with full confidence, the audience will pay attention to them. A lot of preparation is needed and sometimes some people have a talent in talking in front of the people. The good thing about this course is we will be presenting for every single project and so it will give me a chance to familiarise myself with presenting in front of a crowd.

Looking back on this issue, I believe that it wasn’t only just the timing issue but rather more on the content.  I also think this content issue was my fault for not trying to clear up misunderstandings of the project brief with my lecturer.  I need to also read up more on the concepts I am working around in so that I can clear my doubts as well.

Reconstructing:
There are a lot of things that I need to take in consideration in the future. This issue helped me review the problems I had so far. We should have explained less on the sketches and more on the concept of how this sketches made us understand the concept of narratives. We did not describe enough on our sketches in relation to our case study. I felt this was a little difficult to grasp. How can I make this easier for me to understand? What does this mean to understand the hybrid narratives of my documentary short case study? Should I back track a little and figure things out again or just use my sketches and connect them back again?

 

Sketch FIVE: Flashback Scene

There was a scene where they took a picture of the current room for the listing. The next was a video of the past and what Martha and her children did in that room. I found that technical style worth learning. The use of found footages and current photos to emphasise the memories at that place makes it more powerful. So, I decided to do a continuous video of that style. I took past footages of my old high school videos and tried to recreate that style. I did a similar style in the past but in reverse.

The technical side seemed simple enough where you take found footages and use it as a flashback to let the audience know about the past memories of the room itself. I used the hallway of my high school and created a moment there. I felt a powerful technique to show reminiscence and memories of being attached to it. The interaction of showing the viewers the past helps them understand the sentimental value of the apartment. Hence, in this non-linear narrative, gives a good interaction to give the viewers the same feel of the sense of attachment just like Martha.

Sketch FOUR: POV

Participation does not just mean being able to click and and alter the narrative. It also means that you feel like you are there with the people in the film itself that makes it a sense of participation. It also has a feel of participation by using certain shot angles. For example, the first person shot gives a more powerful perspective that makes you feel like you are with the people in the film. The sense of being there has a participatory effect.  I immediately felt like I was opening the door for Martha or I felt like i stood next to her watching her unlock the doors. I went up the stairs with her in real time and I felt like I was listening to her talk as we walk up the stairs.

This sketch is to understand how first person shot helps enhance the participatory aspect. I felt that by feeling like you are the eyes of the person, makes you feel like you are experiencing and witnessing the situation in the film with the person.

This technique really helped me understand the feeling of having a sense of presence in the film. It is a linear narrative where the participants go through the story of the subject.

Sketch THREE: Looking around the Apartment

For this sketch, I was inspired by the apartment chapter. In that chapter, the participating aspect on looking around the apartment is by using a mouse to click left and right to show what Martha does at every corner of the apartment. I decided to try it on as a video format.

I decided to do a panning shot to show the apartment but I could not add people into it because it was a little complex in the editing aspect. I did a comparison with a panoramic shot as well.

I find this lacking in the element of participatory. I could not replicate the participatory effect in the video format. This sense of non-narrative is difficult to replicate in interactivity form.

Sketch TWO: Comparing Narratives – Enhancing with Audio

Following the previous sketch. I decided to make a continuation to the participatory alternative narrative. During the walk up the stairs in 89 steps, Martha feeds you information to you while you walk up the steps. When you stop, she will tell you ‘her dog can do better’ or ‘we wasted enough time, let’s continue.’ I decided to replicate that idea into two comparison shots. I walked up the staircase slowly for the first shot and I ran up the stairs the next. Unfortunately, I could not record my audio so I inserted a text on where the audio should come in. The audio follows the way you continue the narrative. If you are too slow, someone will say to hurry up and if you are too fast, someone will say to wait for them. It makes it more interactive in a sense of you are there to experience it.

This one was fairly easy to do. Just run up and down the stairs at different pace. The only problem I had was starting the shot at the same place. To encounter this problem, maybe I need to have a mark so that I capture the angle. Other than that, this was an interesting aspect to work on.

From this, I realise that the audio really enhance the participation in the narrative. It feels like someone lags behind and calls out for you when you are too fast or someone tells you to quicken your pace when you are too slow. You feel like you participating because you feel a sense of presence in that short.

 

Sketch ONE: Alternate Narratives

I decided to look at the participatory and technical elements of the interactive short. My biggest challenge was how to put it into a video format. I was not fluent in html and coding and I want to have similar experience through video format. I took some reference from other interactive commercials or web series to help me reconstruct this video. There was a part where Martha received the call from someone but I had accidentally clicked ignore. When I clicked ‘Ignore’, I was still stuck at the same spot, the story did not progress so I had more time to venture around to see other information pop-ups under the ‘Listing’ chapter.

I used an example from a commercial with alternate endings – Tipp Ex about the Hunter shoots the bear or not. Using YouTube annotations, the participants are linked to the narration of their choice. This was an easy concept as it was just putting text on a freeze frame.

From this sketch, I realised that even though you are given an interactive short where you get to choose the sequence of the video, filmmakers still have the ultimate control. The ending will always be the same as set by the filmmakers. Seeing that I could not progress with the story when I clicked ‘Don’t Answer’, it gave me a clear view that the filmmakers still have the sequence set but they just want participants to interact with it.

Project TWO: Participatory Aspect on Interactive Online Videos

CONCEPT STATEMENT:
Our group has chosen the online video example, 89 steps from a documentary short turned interactive by UnionDocs. If we contextualise this project in relation to the case studies we have researched on for our project one, it would be placed in the genre of interactive online video practice. We will produce a number of sketches which analyse the narrative/non-narrative form of this online video practice. Each of these sketches will focus on different aspects of the project as a way to understand how it has been made and how relations have been formed between shots to a narrative/non-narrative structure.

Blog on 89 Steps: http://www.pbs.org/pov/blog/povdocs/2014/09/pov-interactive-shorts-qa-with-christopher-allen-89-steps/#.VRhxC5OUen0

SKETCHES:
This is a list of sketches we have made. Take a look at Peter’s case study on 89 steps:


1. An approach to re-create the interactive alternate narrative of 89 Steps’ ‘Answer/Don’t Answer’ during the ‘Listing’ chapter where the realtor called to tell that the apartment is sold. I used the stairs to allow participant to go up the stairs at a slower or faster pace. Using YouTube annotations, the participants are linked to the narration of their choice. This was an easy concept as it was just putting text on a freeze frame.

2. Following the previous sketch. I decided to make a continuation to the participatory alternative narrative. During the walk up the stairs in 89 steps, Martha feeds you information to you while you walk up the steps. When you stop, she will tell you ‘her dog can do better’ or ‘we wasted enough time, let’s continue.’ I decided to replicate that idea into two comparison shots. I walked up the staircase slowly for the first shot and I ran up the stairs the next. Unfortunately, I could not record my audio so I inserted a text on where the audio should come in.

3. Interactive mode into video format. I found the scene of looking around Martha’s apartment. I wonder how to make it into a video format. I did two comparisons, using a pan and using pictures to create panoramic view. I had difficulty adding people and movement into it.

4. Participatory aspect using technical skills. I realised they shot in first person point of view which was Martha’s point of view. That gives viewers a sense of participation. I felt the need to use this element to see how this technique works.

5. The flashback technique. I was intrigued by the use of pictures and flashbacks of the same room during the Listing chapter.

For Peter’s five sketches: http://www.rtfold.com/category/sketch/

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