Today we had to give and receive feedback on our portraits for Project Brief 3. These are some of the comments my group had for each other.

My Portrait: As I mentioned in my own reflection, some of the still images disrupt the flow of the film. The film could have benefited from some panning or animation on these images in order to appear less disjointed. I did get good feedback on the use of music and audio levelling.

Haylee: Technical proficiency and planning with regards to quality of audio recordings as to avoid noise and achieve cleaner audio could use some work, but the content and construction itself was very interesting.

Daniel : Cinematography and audio quality was great. It has clean good flow as a result of clean, smooth editing. Some more texture (more diverse imagery) could have been effective in regards to giving the film a more dynamic feel.

Sandy: I love the comedic moments in all of Sandy’s work and I think if he could capitalise on that a bit more it would be fantastic and a bit more coherent in the general feel of the piece. Audio mixing could use some work but the concepts are good and very entertaining.

Jac: Cinematography again was aesthetically pleasing but like Daniel, more texture in subject matter could make for a deeper and more interesting representation of the subject. Technically very well put together and enjoyable to watch.