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Grace

  • The composition of the interviewee in the neutral eye level mid shot was very elegant and pleasing to look at with the colours white and pink dominating and I felt it matched well with her story of working in primary schools
  • The only thing that I think had real room for improvement was the initial shot of the interviewee, the high angle long shot. The background in this shot distracted from the main subject, and it could have been improved by re-angling the camera to eye level or removing the lamp from the background.

Andrew

  • The emphasis placed on sound was clever in using it as a motif to carry this story of a girl who essentially can’t hear anything. I was also impressed by the different aspects of her life that were presented and the way that they were expressed by her signing and translating at the same time.
  • My only issue with this film was that, despite the importance of sound in this story, the opening sequence introducing the importance of sound was too jarring for the story itself. I felt that the overlapping sounds were too overwhelming for a positively vibed interview about a young girl

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