Although I wasn’t in class today, we were given feedback on our video essays. Our video essay was at around 7 minutes (when the maximum is five) as we hadn’t yet fully cut and refined it. Louise told us to remove a section pertaining to archetypes of sequels that took up almost a minute and a half, and seemed to quite like the rest of it, though she agreed it ran for way too long. She did say that we repeated ourselves at some points (e.g. with the Godfather references) but when it was explained that this was to link it together, she agreed that this was fine. Overall, the feedback was positive, which is good. Now, to finish editing and refining it.
May 25, 2016
Tell Me More // Workshop Week 12
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