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  1. The video really reads like a music video. It has a very particular and cohesive sense of style that matches the tone of the song. Not exactly sure I register the resonance with the poem. I guess it’s a question whether this is important to the work.

    Similarly I can’t quite register the resonance with Alison’s video. In fact I think it actually works better as a response to your own video in terms of tone, and pace. It would be interesting to talk about what aspects of Alison’s video inspired the direction of your poem.

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